Good job! Very concise. Some Grammar mistakes to fix:Warden is going to has done this many timeswhen he first goes therelike Coraline's second momThe warden is makingShe only rewards
Good job! Very concise.
ReplyDeleteSome Grammar mistakes to fix:
Warden is going to
has done this many times
when he first goes there
like Coraline's second mom
The warden is making
She only rewards